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24期 真渴望回到从前 八年级一班 游礼嘉
[ 2011-11-25 21:35:00 | By: 海坛文学 ]
 

真渴望回到从前

    一年又一年,春去春来,花谢花开,多少人就像匆匆而逝的流星在我心中划过,只留下一粒尘埃……。而我也在一年又一年中,悄悄地长大,面对别人的赞叹以及我各种能力的完善,我却发现我痛失了什么,心缺了一块。

又向小时候常去的公园走去。早已经改头换面了,但是还能认出我留下的痕迹。就是那个扭腰器,我曾顽皮地爬上去,坐在扶手上,又摔下来的;就是那个花坛,我玩轮滑鞋,没刹住车,撞上去弄破了嘴唇的;就是那个秋千,我就为荡几下,心甘情愿地排了一下午的队……我多么想要回去啊!可是当我走近一看,和我当时年级相仿的孩子嬉戏着,但我,格格不入。

回到家,我傻愣愣地依在阳台上,顶上是抬头可见的火烧云,瞄了一眼,却不忍再看;手边的玻璃杯,纤尖的茶叶上下舞蹈却不敢喝;清丽的鸟鸣仿佛根根钢针,硬生生地扎..我无法接受这样的事实,我紧闭着眼睛,捂着耳朵,蜷缩起来,睁开恍惚的泪眼,景象时近时远:我不再是那个天真无邪的小屁孩了!

渴望回到从前,与虚伪和善变作别;渴望回到从前,傻傻的太好骗;真渴望回到从前。回到一句表扬都会兴奋几天的时节。

有个名人说了一句话,后来千千万万的人都印证了它:人还没长大时,渴望长大;人长大了,又渴望回到从前。这个年纪,多少大人说:“热血青年,风华正茂”,但是他们怎么知道我们的悲楚呢?课业的负担,繁忙的事务,紧张的排名,让我们过早地勾心斗角,心思不再单纯,想着步步为营,解决同龄的对手还要讨好长辈……我们太累了!以至于迷失了自我。

真渴望回到从前,看什么都是碧海蓝天。

                                                                                              作者:八年级一班 游礼嘉

点评:   
本文语言淳朴而真挚,心理描写到位,以自己的角度道出了青春的烦恼——长大。通过写云、茶叶、鸟鸣,,烘托出作者心中的忧愁不安。结尾‘真渴望回到从前,看什么都是碧海蓝天。’更是表达出了作者不愿长大、眷恋童年的纯真想法。但是,童年已去,对于处在青春期的我们,应该努力发现青春的点滴美好。你会觉得,其实‘碧海蓝天’一直都在。      (点评者:八年级三班朱天瑞)
 
 
 
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